Nyconz421

The sun came up and was slow to brighten the alley's of the city. Robert was still in wolf form when the sunlight began to trickle down to his hiding ...

Very twisted. Hooked me right away. I love the creepiness of the Map Maker and the naive boy. The story is quite a sucess. Good job.

Robert Age: Unkown Species:Werewolf Hair color: Black Eye Color: White with a gold tint to it Special power: Super strength, hightened sense of smell and night vision He could see ...

Good or bad idea to switch from first person to third person throughout a story. Like to inform readers whats happening with other characters while the protagonist isnt around. I'm ...

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Amazing job. Very well written. Keep it up.

Granted but just because you feel like you're not on it doesn't mean you aren't. I wish the Buffalo Sabres would win the Stanley Cup this year (All of it ...

Very good. You could most definitely make this into a longer story. It has great potential and a beginning that hooks the reader.

I don't know if it's a poem really.... If it is though it's very angry.

Granted but the college rejects you. Sorry. I wish people would allow me and my friends more freedoms rather than telling us what to do.

Pretty short. Has a few errors. How many heirs did Poseidon have? Could have some potential.

This was a good poem. The only issue would be all the commas but other than that it is very good. It has raw emotion and people can relate to ...

Okay, So....I hope my writing is improving. I normally write novels and short stories but I've made it a goal to master poetry writing. I am so far from being ...

We were close when you went away, We held hands, cuddled, and talked. You left me for months, But I tried so hard not to leave you. We talked while ...

Good poem. Only thing seems as though there should be more to it. Besides that it is good.