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Re: Esper's Sepulchral I: Prologue
andy-is it? YOU should be giving ME tips! I want to know more... I love it. Great prologue. Make sure that the chapters themselves have lots of action. Philosophy has ...
Mar 4, 2007 -
Re: Belda's dust
Don't forget the importance of sentence length. If sentences are too long they tend to get... well... rambley. Long sentences are fine when describing things but try to break it ...
Mar 2, 2007 -
Re: Darren Shan - "Cirque Du Freak"
I remember this book! I've got it... somewhere... *glances at impeding piles of books guiltily* Yeah, it was a good book. Personally, I prefer more complicated plots (try katherine kerr... ...
Mar 2, 2007