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Okay, I see what you mean about the spacing. Really should look at stuff before I post, willy nilly at 12:30 at night or whenever I posted that... Anyway, I've ...

Hmmm... the age means nothing. Okay, upon doing some research, the diameter of the Earth, (from one source) is actually 12, 472Km (7,900miles), and from another source, 7,962 Miles (Not ...

Okay, that's all really good stuff, thanks. You have to remember I am only 14 though... Not a very good excuse, but it works for most things :D . Um... ...

I hope not. What I plan on doing is sending the character into as many unfamiliar situations as I possibly can, and see what he comes out as in the ...

Er.... Don't exactly know what a stock story is. Look at Chapter 1 to see what I am talking about Snoink

Thanks very much. When I get Chapter 2 written up on here, I will revise that chapter and maybe repost it.

Sorry about that, I missed out on Chapter 13..... What I need help with essentialy is Plot line. I am just posting up the first Chapter now, So you guys ...