NovaRose

Hey, welcome to the site. We've got some awesome writers and critiquers here, and (excluding Emma) most of us don't bite. If you have any questions, feel free to PM ...

6/10 because it looks cool, but it's kinda busy and hard to look at. If that makes any sense at all lol.

Hey, that's pretty cool. The only thing I notice wrong with it are her arms. They're... odd. I can't really explain it. I haven't seen your past work, but this ...

Haha, Snoink, I was gonna be a female character, but somehow I didn't like the idea of a female frog-person, so.... Anyway: Croak checked the Djinn to make sure none ...

Yes, they can, Dynamo--they're just not necessarily right. And Gal, I'm saying that in reference to my own situation specifically. The kind of career I get into is one where ...

I know the words to a ton of songs. Whenver I find a new song I really like, I listen to it a bunch and quickly memorize the whole dang ...

I agree with Crysi. I really liked this poem, but that Oh my God line seems more like you couldn't think of what else to put there. Awesome work!

Interesting lack of almost any punctuation and pretty much no structure, but I liked how it was just kind of a flowing of thought, and it had a pretty funny ...

Just edit your post and say that Alex followed the others to the fight.

DORITOS ARE MADE OUT OF COOKIES!? TPBM is confused.

In response to that: don't worry about Croak; you'll see that his abilities have plenty of balancing weaknesses to them.

I would rather be rich, because it would be an indication that I had become successful in my career, and it would allow me to provide for my children, to ...

Okay, fontroy, two things are fundamentally wrong with that post. First off, you just said that your character shouted "Help as loud as I can!" Secondly, you are nowhere near ...

I like the Paper Clips, actually. For some strange reason. But I still vote Rupees as choice #1. Even if I didn't know what they were, they just sound awesome. ...

I vote that, whatever it is, we don't make it too serious, or in other words, boring. Something that will make people smile a little, but not something people will ...