NovaRose

LOL that's prettty good.

LOL awesome, man! I've always been pretty self-concsious and shy when interacting with people face-to-face, although I am almost the opposite online. I think I'm getting better though.

Definitely Tim McGraw and Nelly. The other ones actually make some sense to me.

I made a new topic because I posted the first one too much at once. Moderators can delete the old one (Boundless) if they want. Prologue It happened so long ...

A slight tingling sensation runs courses through his body sending shivers up his spine. The phrase "runs courses" sounds redundant. And I still think first person is better for parts ...

Meh, I used to play that, but it was wasting my time and I never got past 3rd level.

Actually, until this summer I was a Californians, so... I know for a fact. LOL j/k I was just reminiscing about my old home state. And I was talking like ...

Aha! You from California! I get now. I mean, hey man welcome to the board man dude man! I'll check out those movies soon man. Peace out dude man guy ...

The most annoying thing about people that share your religion trying to force-feed it to other people is that those people become prejudiced against you too, so everyone gets a ...

Well, I really have two styles now, and the cartoony style is one of them. I'm currently shading one that's my other style (it's probably the best pircture I've ever ...

Wait, you want to know why God doesn't appear now? Heh heh. Well, actually, He has. God and His Son appeared to the modern day prophet Joseph Smith, and Christ ...

Maybe some punctuation could help. Nice poem. Depressing, but good.

First of all, how to swear words clarify anything? All they say to me is that you can't think of anything better to say so you just throw in a ...

I like the style of this. It's funny too. Good job.

Try making up bad intros that contradict themselves like the examples at the beginning. I.E. the one that gave a huge and accurate description of Marilee and then said that ...