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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Make Me Stay

    hi! thank you for taking the time to read and reveiw!! :)

    Mar 24, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Make Me Stay

    woah. I read this again and there is so much wrong with it! I should edit it.. but thank you for reading it and helping me! the butter knife was ...

    Mar 24, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Drinking Song No. 3

    I'm not so sure what main subject this poem is about, though I get its for drinking and being lonely. Your grammar is impeccable. Maybe write a longer poem, something ...

    Dec 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: A True Potty Mouth

    OH MY GOD i have no idea why i am literally sitting on the floor, off my chair and laughing so hard i cant type properly. im going to start ...

    Dec 21, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: i am not sick

    thank you so much! you made my day! :):):)

    Oct 23, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: i am not sick

    thank you so much! i did fix the capital letters and i will surely edit it a bit more when i can. :)

    Oct 23, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: i am not sick

    capital letters are important to english, or any language really but you can say its my hamartia. i usually skip that part because it cuts my flow during writing. anyway ...

    Oct 23, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: If I'm Worth It

    omg thank you!!!! you just made my day!!! :):):)

    Sep 9, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Humor Re: Think of the best tile ever, then add "...: Chapter One". That's this things title. Enjoy.

    hey! i loved it! i think that you do have some talent for making me laugh and believe me when i say i'm like nester. i rarely laugh but i ...

    Sep 6, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: If I'm Worth It

    hey Rae! thank you so much for your review! it means so much to me that you took the time to read my work and write about it to me!! ...

    Sep 6, 2014


No one achieves anything alone.
— Leslie Knope