NonFictionIdot

This was really well written! Its so true and i love how you make the reader realize it! My favorite line would have to be: Chained to the depression and ...

This was good! But you had a error that really bugged me. It wasn't too bad but, i don't know, it just got to me. Grammar: "He has just shifted ...

This is kinda confusing. You have two many subject starters and you can combined most of your sentences. Here are some Notes that I took in my writing class: Things ...

I loved the poem! And a poem can be in any format you want it to be. Poetry is of feeling, not of grammatical error. Forestqueen808, If you think that ...