Noelle

Hi there! So I see Samuel was able to keep out of an argument. Pity. I would've loved to see him fight it out with Clavin xD Overall I feel ...

Hi there! So I'm pretty sure I've praised you on your descriptions in like, every review I've done of this novel. And naturally I'm going to do it again. There's ...

Hi there! He could feel his heart fluttering underneath his school jumper Isn't a jumper like a dress? I'm only going off the information I got on google about it ...

Hi there! You categorized this under 'fanfiction' so I was wondering what this a fanfiction for. Just curious. Alright, onto the review. The battle was sad. My own father died, ...

Hi there! Ooooh, what an interesting chapter! We learn a lot here and I also have so many more questions! The first thing I've noticed is that the relationship between ...

Hi there! I watched the man carefully before I decided to ask him for help. "Yes I can help you, just wait a little bit and I will be done ...

Hi there! Okay, so I have one format nitpick of this chapter. The letter that Sylvaris is writing to her husband should be in italics. That way it'll be separate ...

Hi there! First of all, you're title is the best. Just sayin'. “TAMARA!” A voice roared. Ah, you've hit a pet peeve of mine. I don't like when people use ...

Hi there! No doubt he’ll follow through with his threat with wounded he looks. I have to say this is a bit confusing. I think you meant to say 'with ...

Hi there! “I need some time to plan this, to think about this! I could die here! I feel like we’re rushing this. You've used the word 'this' three times ...

Hi there! I figured I'd pop in to see what you're up to writing wise. I have to say, I'm really enjoying what you've got here :) He started talking ...

Hi there! So there's really only one thing that I have to say about this chapter. And it has to do with the very end where Jason says Ember can't ...

Hi there! I'm back for another awesome chapter! One thing I have to say, you never disappoint when it comes to descriptions. I'm a dialogue writer myself and I always ...

Hi there! I totally promised to be on time with these reviews and this happens -_- But I'm here for a review now! The room is just dimly lit. The ...

Hi there! Dafyr’s eyes flitted about the room . A long, polished oaken table stretched across the center of the room. You use the word 'room' here too many times. ...