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Re: The Veil - Chapter 8
Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! You've done a great job writing Qui'in. She's such a curious character, one how is so sly and cautious at ...
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Re: The Veil - Chapter 7
Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! One thing I really like about this novel is that it has adult characters that are going around trying to ...
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Re: The Veil - Chapter 6
Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! Or perhaps, they were too young. I don't think the comma is needed here. You're doing a good job with ...
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Re: The Veil - Chapter 5
Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! Tired of me yet? ;) I know I've mentioned a lot about your world building already, but I'm going to ...
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Re: The Veil - Chapter 4
Hi there! Noelle back for another Review Day review! Wait, Qui'in is a prostitute?? o.o I never got that from the previous chapters. Must just be my innocent brain. Anyways... ...
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Re: The Veil - Chapter 3
Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! You selfish, stupid son of a bitch, just get out, so I can figure out how you’ll survive this.” So ...
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Re: The Veil - Chapter 2 Part 2
Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! Gandalf!! Qui’in dawdled on the way to the queen’s room as she always did when her friend wasn’t with her, ...
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Re: The Veil - Chapter 2
Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! Except, of course, for the 'ceremonial' guard standing at attention in front of the doors Just a tiny comment here. ...
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Re: The Veil - Chapter 1
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! Meg! I think your novel is the only LMS one that I haven't reviewed yet >< So I figured I'd come ...
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Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! Hooray! I'm all caught up! :D Right, let me just get to the review. Again, no grammar of spelling errors ...
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Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! Quick nitpick here: Sylvaris thanked Rey profusely for his help, but and took her leave soon. So this is a ...
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Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! Dafyr glanced up from his book as the Queen approached, with Ameli one step behind. So at the end off ...
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Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! No! Magic is not allowed to mess with Eric and Myles! No! It's bad enough that Magic is messing with ...
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Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! So I'd mention something about the first paragraph being all mushed together, but I figured it must just be YWS messing ...
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Re: Eight Reasons Why I Kissed Hayden Beaufort (Part 3/8)
Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! One thing I've noticed as I've been reading is that you use italics for a significant amount of words. Sometimes ...
Jul 27, 2014
