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Re: Who I Am Is Who You Are
This is a really good story. I like how you begun it as if it was a teen novel, as someone mentioned before me, but then it all changed. There ...
Oct 2, 2010 -
Re: Flyer's Flight: The Story Of The Opal (Chapter 1)
To be honest, I was kind of disappointed by this chapter. I understand that you are trying to add background information to the story, but after the tragedy filled prolouge, ...
Oct 2, 2010 -
Re: Flyer's Flight: The Story Of The Opal (Prologue)
I really like the beginning to this story. By starting with a tragedy, you pull the reader in and make them want to read more. You also didn't give a ...
Oct 1, 2010 -
Re: Harry Potter Rapping Battle
This is so cool!! Great job. I am an ultimate Harry Potter superfan so I was really happy you wrote this. It's great
Sep 29, 2010 -
Re: Story of a Teenage Theif
It was so tempting. There it was, sitting on the table with no one around it. The most beautiful diamond necklace he had ever seen. What was stopping him? Why ...
Sep 28, 2010