Noelle

Andreas-Ares So first thing today we trained. I was paired up with Jack because he needed to 'help' me with my fighting. I didn't mind it that much. Especially since ...

Granted, but you're the villan who loses in the end. I wish I wouldn't be scared of rollercoasters.

9/10 I'll be honest with you, I had to look up plasticine, but I so love it!

*I don't know what day it is. Sorry I haven't posted in a while but I had a basketball tournament all weekend.* Lexie-Ares So we won capture the flag! It ...

I love it! I would definatly listen to this song. :)

Lexie-Ares >Thursday< Ah capture the flag. No contest, it's my favorite activity here at camp. What could be better than beating up on those who were stupid enough not to ...

I'm gonna guess 6.

Andreas-Ares >Wednesday< So yesterday Jack challenged me to a fight. I took that challenge. Worst decision of my life. He told me he knew how to fight hand to weapon, ...

If you were a fish, I would let you swim away If you were a fish, however your not, I wouldn't let you leave I feel like you contradicted yourself ...

Oh my gosh, I really liked it! You did a good job of using punctuation to break up your poem.

That's good, Noelle, but could you make it the next day and put >Tuesday< before your post? Thanx Sorry. I forgot to do that.

Lexie-Ares Yeah, yeah, yeah, we all know that Tristen lead his high school volleyball team to states, but that doesn't change the fact that I beat him. I don't think ...

Lexie-Ares Cassandra was so gonna get it. I'll get back at her later though. For now, I had a volleyball game to win. Honestly, I couldn't tell you whether or ...

I really like the imagery you use in this poem. The only thing I would suggest is using some punctuation. To me this poem just keeps going, and going, and ...

I liked the message of the poem. Just remember not all poetry has to rhyme. I feel like you were forcing the rhyme throughout the poem. Other than that it's ...