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Re: Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry (Closed)
Name: Lima Hawkens Age/ What year are you? 11, 1st year Pureblood or Muggle? Muggle Appearance: Tall and skinny, dyed black hair and black eyes. Her original hair color is ...
Jul 19, 2011 -
Re: Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry (Closed)
Can you save me a spot for a female student?
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: Simplicity
Shredderman wrote: it definitely captures the spirit of a loving parent looking on at their child, or even perhaps, somebody retrospectively looking at their past self. mesmerizing! I totally agree ...
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: The F.U.N. Song.
I love this! It's so great, I was singing it in my head the whole time I was reading it :) Keep writing! And coming up with awesome songs like ...
Jun 5, 2011 -
Re: Prologue: A Country on Edge
Thanks for the input. I will edit it and try to make it better. :)
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Prologue: A Country on Edge
A scream rang out through the streets as Drew walked home from college, but he didn't even turn around. He knew what was happening; a war was beginning and going ...
May 26, 2011 -
Re: A Letter From the People
Hi there! This is a good poem. I like how you made it a letter. It's well written and I enjoyed reading it. I only have one critique and it's ...
May 19, 2011 -
Re: A Day They Would Never Forget: Chapter One
Hi there! There isn't really anything bad for me to say about this. I like it and I can't wait to read the rest of it. We just finished talking ...
May 19, 2011 -
Re: You just don't listen
My corrections are in red. jedigeek wrote: You Just Don't listen You are perfect , perfect for me and I know it. You are everything I want in a guy ...
May 18, 2011 -
Re: Water for Elephants
The movie was really good. I don't know if you guys read the book or not, but it wasn't a bad interpretation from the book. I know the commercials made ...
May 18, 2011 -
Re: Random Pictures
Hi there! First off, I like all of your pictures, but my favorite is the second one. Might be a bit of a biased review for that one ;) First ...
May 18, 2011 -
Re: Help the Peeps
I love this! The story is cute and makes me smile. You humans seem to feel sorry for the food you eat without asking us how we feel about the ...
May 17, 2011 -
Re: Big Head and Other Scraps
That was very interesting, I really like it. What I like is how informal it is, and because it's not a continuing story, it works. (Wow, I just re-read that ...
May 17, 2011 -
Re: My greatest fear.
Wow, this looks great! I love the focus (the bug) and the background (happy flower). You probably didn't plan it this way, but I like how the bug is on ...
May 17, 2011 -
Re: She Was Blind
Hey there! I would like to say I enjoyed this story very much. I like how each paragraph displays a different thought, like a little piece of his memory each ...
May 17, 2011
