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Re: Tides.
Hi there! You reading it out loud made it a lot easier to review! :) Honestly, when I read a poem, I read it out loud to myself because then ...
Aug 7, 2011 -
Re: Mind Games
Hi there! This was a good poem, I enjoyed reading it. I can definitly relate to this. This piece flows really well. I do have one little critique though. I ...
Aug 7, 2011 -
Re: Watermelon
Hi there! So, I really enjoyed reading this piece. Watermelon is so delightfully yummy :) Anyway, I like the punctuation placement. You've put the right emphasis on the right words. ...
Aug 7, 2011 -
Re: A Life All My Own
This is a short story that I'm entering in a contest here on YWS. The prompt was to write about your deepest desire. Any kind of critiques are welcome! And ...
Aug 7, 2011 -
Re: Vines and My Puppy again (And More)
Oh my gosh, these picture are so amazing! I absolutly love the last two. The third one is my favorite. I'm a country girl so I like seeing pictures of ...
Aug 7, 2011 -
Re: Carry Me Home Cover!
Hi there! I just got done reviewing another one of your photos! Or did I? Was that you? Hm, well, maybe I did. :) Anyway, I really, really, really, really ...
Aug 7, 2011 -
Re: Get Higher
Hi there! Honestly, I liked the original shot better than the edit. It couldjust be the fact that I live in the country and I appreciate the beauty of the ...
Aug 7, 2011 -
Re: Photo Critiques
Hi there! I just want to start off by saying I enjoyed looking at your photos! So here goes: Photo #1 This one, in my opinion, was the weakest of ...
Aug 7, 2011 -
Re: Letting Go - Chapter One
This chapter is really, really great! I enjoyed reading it! Actually, I didn't want to stop reading. That's how much I liked it. I really like how you got inside ...
Aug 7, 2011 -
Re: Fallen Down
This was a really good piece. Just like HenPen said above, I couldn't stop reading it! It was well written and interesting. I know at the beginning you said that ...
Aug 7, 2011 -
Re: The Mirror's Curse (full!)
Felicia Everyone began talking at once. Where were we? What were we going to do? Was Rhyder really telling the truth? "Listen guys," I piped up. I had had enough ...
Aug 4, 2011 -
Re: Hey!
Hi there Katlyn! Welcome to the site. :) I am pretty much obsessed with Harry Potter. I read the books over and over again and they never get old! Actually, ...
Aug 3, 2011 -
Re: Bunny :)
That is such a cute picture!! I love bunnies. :)
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: Heart of Moon
Hi there! One quick comment: a facebook quiz was actually accurate?? Wow, they usually are completely off the mark! :) This poem is good, even if it is short. Poem's ...
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: Love's Sweet Bloom
First off I would like to say that I truly enjoyed this poem. It's got great imagry and rhyme. I can definitely feel the love as I read it. The ...
Aug 2, 2011
