Noelle

Hi there! Congrats on your first post on YWS! :) I just want to start out by saying this story has great potential. It's has a great plot and a ...

Hi there! This was a very interesting piece to say the least. It was good though because it made me think. Well, it confused me as I read along, but ...

Hi there! I really enjoyed reading this. I'm going to comment on the plot here real quick if you don't mind. I think the plot is great and good natured. ...

Hi everyone! So I have finally got wifi in my house which means I can get on here anytime I want! Which also means I have more time to read ...

Hi there! I liked this piece. I think it was quite funny and perfectly written. This reminded me of an authors attempt to get more information about their character. I ...

Hi there! I enjoyed reading this story about your life. But I agree with paintingtherain, I think it was a little too simple and factual. I feel like you just ...

Hi there! Wow, this is great! This is the kind of essay I talked about when I commented on your other essay. I like the way you compared a corridor ...

Hi there! Ah, college essays, I hated writing them! I'd be doing my application on line and then I'd reach the page with an essay and I'd put it off! ...

Hi there! That's a really good drawing. It reminds me of abstract art, was that what you were going for? The first one is quite colorful. I only saw six ...

Hi there! I enjoyed this. I think it's a lot like the type of music that people listen to today. Keep writing! :)

Hi there! I really enjoyed this. It was written very well and the characters are realtable. The three of them actually reminded me of my best friends and me. I ...

Hi there! I'm glad you cleared up the fact that Ailia is not Fermina. That's the impression I got from reading this, especially the part inbetween the astrics. If Ailia ...

Hi there! (again) So I just reviewed chapter one of this before I realized there was a prolouge! So, I came here and read this, hoping for another great read. ...

Hi there! This was a very well written chapter. The storyline is quite intriguing and you really have me feeling for Elizabeth. Throughout this chapter I felt her excitement, her ...

Hi there! This was a very good piece. I enjoyed reading it and couldn't stop! Your characters are great and you explained them exceptionally well. One problem I found within ...