Noelle

Hi there! This was a great piece! I quite enjoyed it. I have always wondered, what would we all do if Jesus walked into the room? This seems to be ...

Hi there! This was a great piece. It caught my interest and kept me reading through the whole thing. The conversation was intriguing and made me think. "Are you sure ...

Hi there! I like this, it's really good. It flows well and has nothing I can find to correct. I'm not a huge fan of cussing, but if it works ...

Hi there! Sudden adrenaline, horror start s to shove, You forgot the 's' at the end. Visions of Pradise start of to become clear, It should be 'to' instead of ...

Hi there! I'm here to review, a requested. :) This was a really good piece. I enjoyed reading it! It was written well (only a few grammer mistakes) and was ...

I wrote this story after listening to Love The Way You Lie by Eminem. (Yes, it's about an abusive relationship.) The song has a very powerful message and I wanted ...

Hi there! This was a good story. I enjoyed it. The idea is very original, I know I would've never come up with this! I can could see trough through ...

Hi there! Since this is a contest entry (and you requested this) I am going to review a little harsher than I usually would. Please don't take it personally if ...

Hi there! First off I want to let you know that I enjoyed reading this. It kept me guessing the whole time. My suggestions are in red in the spoiler. ...

Hi there! This was a really good piece of poetry. Unfortunatly, like IcyFlame, I'm not a poet either, but the one thing I understand about poetry is the flow. That's ...

Hi there! I enjoyed reading this poem. I could tell you put a lot of thought into it and that it's very personal. How could I when it only causes ...

Hi there! This was a very touching piece. It actually almost made me cry because I've heard so many stories like this. It was an interesting read, but it was ...

Hi there! I really like these lyrics. From the beginning I was able to sing it in my head, putting my own music to it. I like the message and ...

Granted, but it's a toy dime and you can't get your money back. I wish it would rain for a couple hours.

It's been quite a while since I updated this novel. Honestly, I got distracted with other stories and such. If you haven't read the prolouge, you probably should. Arthur awoke ...