Noelle

Hi there! This is a great start. There is a lot of great imagery in this. However, I feel like in each stanza you took a sentence and randomly split ...

Hi there! This is good. It is very interesting and kept me reading through the whole thing. I like how you had Katie name the voice. I think that's cute ...

Hi there! This poem is great. It's very well written and has so much great emotion in it. I don't have anything bad to say, so I figured I'd point ...

Hi there! This is really powerful stuff. It was written very well. I couldn't find any spelling or grammer mistakes, so you're good with that. This poem flows really well ...

Sounds like fun! I'll join. :) Name: Kami Meyers Age (you haven't taken the test yet so you're still 14): 14. Appearance (picture please): images3.jpg Power: Air Ring (matches your ...

Hi there! I really enjoyed this. It was quite good and I think the grammer was perfect. This flowed very well and was a good read. Who will remember us? ...

Hi there! This is a great piece. I enjoyed reading it! It was very well written and I couldn't find any spelling or grammer mistakes. I realy wish you would ...

Hi there! I sing some things randomly, but I'm not brave enough to actually write them down! They're usually horrible. ^_^ Your piece is great. I enjoyed reading it and ...

Hi there! I really enjoyed this. It seems like a great start. Is it going to be a novel? I can't wait to read more! The characters are solid and ...

Hi there! My corrections/suggestions are in bold Dark emotions, battle scarred. He walked in the shadows of death. The broken one with eyes so hollow, For justice and love he ...

Hi there! In the far, far distance he could almost see a glimmer that was the city, but that was a place they only went to on special occasion s ...

Hi there! This was a very good piece and I felt like I was getting inside Nik's head. You did a great job describing him and his feelings toward his ...

Hi there! You did a fine job with this piece. Your main character was very relatable and his situation was understandable. The romantic part of the piece was good as ...

Hi there! I like this. It's original, not like any other 'I'm gonna go out and do my own thing' song I've heard. There were a few spots that I ...

Hi there! This was really good. It pulled me in, kept me reading. The characters were interesting, but I would've liked to know more about them. Why did they have ...