Noelle

Hi there! This was a good poem. I enjoyed reading it. Your grammer and spelling are good so no worries there. It flows well and the flow only falters once: ...

Hi there! I'm here to review as requested. I really enjoyed reading this. I went and read the first chapter too and you did a great job continuing the story. ...

Hi there! First off I want to say that this was a very depressing piece. Not that that's a bad thing. I understand this is about cancer patients, but I ...

Storybooks are so much fun. You'll enjoy it! :)

Hi there! This is a great start. I really enjoyed reading it. It was well written and definitely caught my attention. Good job! If you want to know whether or ...

Hi there! This was a great story. I enjoyed the fact that you jumped from one topic to another based off of what was said at the end of the ...

Kami Meyers-Air/Aria Dear Kami Meyers, report to the Determination room A.S.A.P. My heart pounded. It was time. Finally, I was going to get to see what goes on in there. ...

Hi! I'm Noelle.

Hi there! This is a great piece! I really enjoyed it. You did a great job with displaying the emotions one feels when they have writers block. I feel the ...

Hi there! Now, I know this is based off a true story so it must be very important to you. It was a good read and very well written. The ...

Hi there! This was a good piece and I enjoyed reading it! It flows well. There aren't any spelling or grammer mistakes I can find. There was really only one ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS and congrats on your first post! This is a good start and it seems like it will be an interesting novel. You developed Thom very ...

Hi there! Wow...these are great! I think I looked over them about a hundred times because I loved them so much! You are so talented! My favorite is the third ...

Hi there! This is such a great poem. I really enjoyed reading it! It had great imagery and I could feel the passion in it. I like the overall idea ...

Hi there! This is a really great poem especially since you said you weren't much of a poet. There was a great amount of imagery and passion in this. You ...