Noelle

Hi there! This is a great poem, I really enjoyed reading it! You did a great job. I understand what you're trying to say and I think you did a ...

This is basically just a way for me to get my feelings down on paper. I'm a short story person, but I couldn't think of how to make this a ...

Hi there! This was a really good poem. I like the structure, how you made the text centered. It's very original. Your spelling and grammer is good, so no worries ...

Hi there! When I first looked at this, I was wondering how you made it work. It looked very long and the lines seemed to be too long to accomplish ...

Kami-Aria My heart pounded as I watched everyone else call the rings. This was all that happened? Was this even possible? How could your powers be directly linked to a ...

Hi there! This was a good read. I could tell you put a lot of thought into it. There is a lot of emotion in this. I like the way ...

Hi there! Wow...this is really good! I enjoyed it very much. There's great imagery. It's written very well; your grammer and spelling are perfect. It flows really well too. There's ...

Hi there! This is a very good peom. I like the way you break up each line. It's very original and I've never seen a poem written like that. Your ...

Hi there! I'm here to review, as requested. Wow...this was really great! You started off great, introducing one of the flaws Noor sees in herself and then following it up ...

Irving Robinson was an older man, somewhere in his late sixties. He never used his true age because his kids never seemed to care how old he was. So why ...

Hi there! our look alike s You forgot the 's' on the end of 'alikes'. Not a big deal, but I figured I'd point it out. My speech - my ...

Hi there! This poem is great! I honestly couldn't find anything to correct so I'm going to tell you what I liked about it. My comments are in red . ...

Hi there! This is a very good piece. I enjoyed it. You did a good job with your imagery and such. Your grammer and spelling is good so no worries ...

Hi there! This was a very interesting story. I like the premise and the main character is great. Your dialouge was solid and I quite enjoyed reading it. It made ...

Hi there! First off I just want to say that this was very good, amazing even. It was well written and captivating. I didn't want to stop reading! I like ...