Noelle

Hi there! I really like this cover. It's quite original and has a great color scheme. It's mysterious and wonderful. The bright colors give it a happy feel to layer ...

Hi there! This is a really good poem. It flows well and there aren't any grammer or spelling errors that I found. You did a great job describing the point ...

Hi there! This is a good piece. I can relate to this because I babysit and I feel this way about the kids I look after. You put a lot ...

Hi there! I really enjoyed this poem. It flows really well and sticks to the point you're trying to get across. There's great illiteration and rhyme. I don't have any ...

Hi there! First off I'd like to say that these are great drawings. Your strokes are great and the colors are incoorporated well. The blend together and work great together. ...

Hi there! Wow...this is a great piece! I love it! It's got great emotion and imagery. I love the emotion you put into this. It's written very well and I ...

Hi there! I quite enjoyed this piece. I like how it jumps right to the action. You did a great job describing the scene your character is seeing. I could ...

Hi there! This made me laugh in several different spots. I loved it! When I first read the description I was thinking, 'stream of conciousness, really?' I had to read ...

Hi there! This is a great start. Your characters are real and I find myself relating to them. This made me think back on a school day in December when ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS! First off I'd like to say that this poem definitely has potential. Not that it's bad, but I think you could've added more to it. ...

Hi there! This is a great start. Your description is good and I can't find any spelling or grammer errors. The emotion you put into this is just incredible. It ...

It had to be done. And I was the one who had done it. I couldn’t believe it. He was dead. I had killed him. Some poor kid's father was ...

Hi there! I liked this piece a lot. You put a lot of emotion into it and it definitely paid off. Your descriptions are great and you did a good ...

Dragonette: that's the second time I've messed up like that! I'll change it.

Hi there! First off I just want to say that for a spur of the moment piece, it is very good. It flows well and I couldn't find any grammar ...