Noelle

Hi there! My comments/corrections are posted below in red . its it's a random piece of stuff a collection of words struggling to make sense creating a meaning finding... searching ...

Hi there! The dragon on the side is great. Honestly though, I didn't notice it until you mentioned it (I looked at the picture before reading your post before it). ...

Hi there! Wow, these are great! I love them. The shading and coloring is great. Sketch #1: I like the stones. They are drawn really well and they're all the ...

Hi there! I really like both of these pictures. I like how you focused on the one thing and didn't let anything else get in the way. There aren't any ...

Hi there! I really enjoyed reading this poem. It's written very well and flows well. You did a great job with making your words work with the point you're trying ...

I've kind of hit a spot of writer's block with the novel I'm working on. I'm trying to jumpstart my creativity by writing short stories. I found this website that ...

Hi there! My corrections/comments are all in red: What happens when the Princesses don’t need the Knights?

Hi there! I think you did a really good job with this. It flows really well and can be easily set to a tune. Your rhyming is good as well, ...

Hi there! All my comments and such are in red: The ground nearly shakes, Full of a crowd's anticipation, Bursting, rippling, repelling out, Ready for their son to come home. ...

Hi there! This is a great poem. I really enjoyed reading it! The rhyming is good although 'pity' and 'me' don't really rhyme, but it still works. I couldn't find ...

Arthur left Max’s office an hour later and headed to the cafeteria. It was nearly twelve and he hadn’t even gotten breakfast. All because Max had to serve donuts. The ...

Hi there! This poem is really good. I haven't read many short poems, but yours is great! You packed a lot of punch into those three lines. This poem flows ...

Hi there! So I see everyone else already commented on the grammer and spelling errors, so I'm going to say what I like about this piece. My comments are in ...

Hi there! I love this poem. I feel the same way. I would much rather sit in the grass under a tree. This poem flows very well and has great ...

Hi there! I was very excited to see you had posted the second chapter of this! I read the prolouge/chapter 1 and I was really looking forward to reading more ...