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Noelle

if we didn't have words to read, write, and speak, I think I would die

  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Harry Potter, Voldemort and a cookie.

    Hi there! So, there's two reasons I decided to read this: 1. It's about Harry Potter 2. I liked the title. I read this through and really enjoyed it! It ...

    Aug 21, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: An Adventure In A Cave

    Hi there! This story was a very interesting read. You did a good job with moving along the story and because of this I wanted to keep reading it. I ...

    Aug 21, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Chasing down the wind

    Hi there! This is a good poem. Like iceblender said, I liked the confusing aspect of this poem. When I was reading through it there were parts where I just ...

    Aug 21, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: seven headed breakup poem

    Hi there! Wow, this is great, really amazing. You did an excellent job with this! It flows real well and tells a great story. There's a ton of emotion and ...

    Aug 21, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Seas of Gold

    Hi there! This is a great poem. I really enjoyed reading it. It was written very well and there aren't any spelling or grammer errors I could find. It also ...

    Aug 21, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Sing

    Hi there! Wow, this is a great poem, I enjoyed reading it! You did a great job keeping the piece rhythmic and flowing. It sounds great and has a definite ...

    Aug 21, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: I love you, too.

    Hi there! My corrections/comments are in red below: She had been crying all night But, never let him know. She had been thinking of him all day But, never let ...

    Aug 21, 2011
  • Archive Re: Dalle Private School (Closed)

    Sorry, never mind about saving me a spot. I don't think I'll have time to keep up with this.

    Aug 21, 2011
  • Archive Re: Dalle Private School (Closed)

    Can you please reserve a spot for a female student?

    Aug 21, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Milk and Cookie Love

    Hi there! I really like this, it’s cute! I like the little pixels twinkling in the background. They remind me of stars! :) Do you know what this really reminds ...

    Aug 20, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Garden

    Hi there! This is a really great poem. I really, really enjoyed reading it. Sometimes when major things happen in our life it brings out the best in us. It ...

    Aug 20, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: suicide in an airplane

    Hi there! I enjoyed reading your poem. It flowed very well and I couldn't find any spelling or grammer errors. You did a good job adding imagery and background information ...

    Aug 20, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Cows

    Hi there! This is a very good poem. You did a great job telling the story and you broke up the stanzas in just the right places. I like the ...

    Aug 20, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Best Friends

    Hi there! I enjoyed reading your poem. It's written fairly well and you did a great job getting your point across. You put a lot of emotion into this. There ...

    Aug 20, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Sapling

    Hi there! This is a very good poem, I enjoyed reading it! You had great emotion and imagery. It flows really well and has a great rhythm to it. I ...

    Aug 20, 2011


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