Noelle

Hi there! This is a great poem, I enjoyed reading it! It told a good story and really had a good balance between show and tell. Your imagery is quite ...

Hi there! I really enjoyed reading this poem, it's great! Your lines really flowed well together and worked to keep the poem moving. You also have great imagery and paint ...

Hi there! This is a good poem and tells a good story. You have great description in this and great imagery. I really got a good picture in my head ...

This is for the fear contest. I basically had to write the scariest story I could possibly think of. I have edited many, many times today, but I'm still not ...

Hi there! This is a really good song. I like it. The rhyme scheme is really good. It flowed well and I didn't see any place where that flow faltered. ...

Hi there! This is a really great poem, I enjoyed reading it! Your imagery is great and you put a lot of emotion into it. I like how you reapeated ...

Hi there! This is a great piece, I enjoyed reading it! You did a great job writing in the point of view of a non-human character. The wolf's thoughts still ...

Hi there! This is really good, I enjoyed reading it! I like how you basically made this one big monolouge. You really got into your character's head and brought out ...

Hi there! The path treaded by Jesus pained, but it’s time we walk it This is my favorite line. It's so true and I completely agree with it. Overall this ...

Hi there! Both of these are really great covers. The first one is my favorite, though. I like the way the girl's hair is tossed in front of her face. ...

Hi there! Wow...this is an amazing story! You did a really great job potraying the emotions needed to make this kind of story work. You really got inside your character's ...

Hi there! I really enjoyed this piece. It was written well and you kept me reading to the very end. The descriptions you wrote are amazing. You described the world ...

Hi there! "Because I'm a chick, and you let me pick the flick." I loved this answer! It's really funny. :) This is a great piece. To me it's basically ...

Hi there! I tried to write a story like this a couple years ago, but it never happened. All of these topics are tough and hard to write about, especially ...

Hi there! I would comment on the grammer errors I found, but it looks like jayleighsmith already took care of that, so I'm going to comment on the content of ...