Noelle

Hi there! First off I want to say that I think this is really good. I read the first part as well and they both fit perfectly together. It's sort ...

Hi there! First I just want to say that I'm glad someone wrote a poem that was about everyday life. Almost everyone goes through these things, so this poem is ...

Hi there! I really enjoyed this piece. It was very interesting and kept me reading to the end. At first I was a little confused when you switched the names ...

Hi there! So, I can definitely say I was a little confused by this. But like you said before, I might be so I'm not going to comment on that. ...

Hi there! Wow...this is great! I was totally blown away at how this ended. Definitely not what I was expecting! Great job with adding the element of surpise. Your imagery ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS! This is a very good piece. I like how you told the background within the lines of the story rather than before it. That way ...

Hi there! Wow...these are great! I thought the first one looked a bit odd, but that's only because it was scanned in. I though the whole face wasn't centered, but ...

Hi there! This is a good start. It seems like a good prolouge to a novel. You have good imagery and really get into the main character's head. You wrote ...

Hi there! This is a good story, you told it beautifully. I think you should put the spoiler befor the story though, because I was genuily confused while reading most ...

Hi there! I really enjoyed reading this story. It was written very well and you really dug deep into your amin character's mind. I could feel her pain, the awkwardness ...

Hi there! I really enjoyed this story. Your characters were solid and developed really well. I like the character of Danny Hall. He was your typical, run of the mill ...

Hi there! Wow...this is a great piece! You described everything quite well and had me reading to the very end. I really like the main character. She's one of those ...

Hi there! This is a great story! You put a ton of imagery and emotion into this and kept me reading through the end. The characters were portrayed perfectly, not ...

Hi there! I was impressed by the way you wrote this considering teenagers driving drunk is such a touchy subject. However, I do agree with roostangarar about this. You need ...

Hi there! This poem is written very well. I found it very easy to read and it had a definite rhythm to it. Your imagery is great and you really ...