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Re: HI IM ME
Hi there! Welcome to the site! My name is Noelle. I absolutely love reading poetry even though I'm not too good at writing it myself. I hope you write stuff ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: The Atman Callus
Hi there! I really, really enjoyed reading this! It flowed really well and had a definite rhythm to it. You imagery was great and the emotion you put into it ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: The Fallen Saint
Hi there! I was reading through this and I was thinking, this is exactly how I feel! I totally agree with everything you wrote in this poem. This poem is ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: The Boy Who Became My Shadow
Hi there! This is a great poem. You did a good job making it flow and keeping up the rhythm. You put a lot of emtion into this and your ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: The Bronze Challenges (chapter one)
Hi there! I think this is a great start. You reeled me in right from the beginning. This chapter reminded me of Aladdin, which is good because it's my favorite ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Twisted Nursery Rhymes
Hi there! Wow, this was a great idea! I have never heard of someone re--writing old nursery rhymes. I'm impressed that you came up with the idea! :) I liked ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Neon Lamps
Hi there! I really enjoyed this story. I'm always impressed when I read a story like this because I've tried to write flash fiction and failed. It's very hard to ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: crawling
Hi there! Welcome to YWS! I liked this poem. It's simple and easy to read/understand which is a good thing! The flow of this piece is great and I couldn't ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Shattered Rainbows
Hi there! I had the same idea to post something before review day, but I didn't get around to it. Anyway, this is a good story. I like your characters, ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Age is but a number
Hi there! That was a great ending! I like how you built it up, giving subtle hints as you went along. I kind of guessed that something was up with ...
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: The Mirror's Curse (full!)
Felicia "No!" I cried out. The group was falling apart right before my very eyes. I was off fighting an orc when I saw Kyler. Dead. Death. Those were the ...
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: The Toy Boat
This idea just popped into my head. I've only read through it a couple of times so there's probably mistakes. I really don't know why I wrote this, but it's ...
Aug 26, 2011 -
Re: heart broken
Hi there! You did a much better job the second time around. I can see the changes you have made and it definitely makes the poem better. I like how ...
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: Nationality
I'm Greek, Polish and American. I'm definitely into my Greek side the most though.
Aug 24, 2011 -
Re: Dreams Tell Lies (Cover)
Hi there! Wow...these are great! The bright colors and detailed picture really drew me in. I can't really tell which one's my favorite, I love both of them! The first ...
Aug 24, 2011
