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Noelle

if we didn't have words to read, write, and speak, I think I would die

  • Welcome Mat Re: HI IM ME

    Hi there! Welcome to the site! My name is Noelle. I absolutely love reading poetry even though I'm not too good at writing it myself. I hope you write stuff ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Atman Callus

    Hi there! I really, really enjoyed reading this! It flowed really well and had a definite rhythm to it. You imagery was great and the emotion you put into it ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Fallen Saint

    Hi there! I was reading through this and I was thinking, this is exactly how I feel! I totally agree with everything you wrote in this poem. This poem is ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: The Boy Who Became My Shadow

    Hi there! This is a great poem. You did a good job making it flow and keeping up the rhythm. You put a lot of emtion into this and your ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: The Bronze Challenges (chapter one)

    Hi there! I think this is a great start. You reeled me in right from the beginning. This chapter reminded me of Aladdin, which is good because it's my favorite ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Twisted Nursery Rhymes

    Hi there! Wow, this was a great idea! I have never heard of someone re--writing old nursery rhymes. I'm impressed that you came up with the idea! :) I liked ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Neon Lamps

    Hi there! I really enjoyed this story. I'm always impressed when I read a story like this because I've tried to write flash fiction and failed. It's very hard to ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: crawling

    Hi there! Welcome to YWS! I liked this poem. It's simple and easy to read/understand which is a good thing! The flow of this piece is great and I couldn't ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Shattered Rainbows

    Hi there! I had the same idea to post something before review day, but I didn't get around to it. Anyway, this is a good story. I like your characters, ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Age is but a number

    Hi there! That was a great ending! I like how you built it up, giving subtle hints as you went along. I kind of guessed that something was up with ...

    Aug 27, 2011
  • Archive Re: The Mirror's Curse (full!)

    Felicia "No!" I cried out. The group was falling apart right before my very eyes. I was off fighting an orc when I saw Kyler. Dead. Death. Those were the ...

    Aug 27, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Toy Boat

    This idea just popped into my head. I've only read through it a couple of times so there's probably mistakes. I really don't know why I wrote this, but it's ...

    Aug 26, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: heart broken

    Hi there! You did a much better job the second time around. I can see the changes you have made and it definitely makes the poem better. I like how ...

    Aug 25, 2011
  • Randomosity Re: Nationality

    I'm Greek, Polish and American. I'm definitely into my Greek side the most though.

    Aug 24, 2011
  • Other Re: Dreams Tell Lies (Cover)

    Hi there! Wow...these are great! The bright colors and detailed picture really drew me in. I can't really tell which one's my favorite, I love both of them! The first ...

    Aug 24, 2011


My spelling is wobbly. It's good spelling, but it wobbles, and the letters get in the wrong places.
— A.A. Milne