Noelle

Hi there! My comments are in red below. Love for sake of love? Perhaps. Do not look upon my sad and miserable heart I like the emotion put into these ...

Hi there! Wow...that's all I can say right now. I'm such in awe by how good this story is. Here I thought that the main character was going to go ...

Hi there! Oh my gosh, this is such a cute story! I mean that in a good way of course. It kind of reminded me of when I was young ...

Hi there! A fellow Team Watchmen here to review! :) I had always loved to learn. I feel like you don't need the word 'had' here. It sounds like your ...

Hi there! I really don't have much to say about this, but my comments are in red below: I saw a poem today. Can you really only see a poem? ...

Light screams from your eyes, I can tell that you're trying to add some imagery here, but I don't think 'screams' is the right word to use. Maybe you could ...

Hi there! This is a great poem. I can feel the motion you put into this. Good job! You also did a greatsjob with your imagery. You have a good ...

Hi there! First off, let me say that this is a great poem. You seemed to have put quite a lot of thought into this. There's great imagery and emotion ...

Hi there! Wow, this is a great! I can definitely feel the oodles of emotion in this. You did a great job getting inside the father's head. I like how ...

Hi there! My comments are in red : Because I was crying, crying softly With the word 'beacause' at the beginning here it gives us the impression that there was ...

Hi there! Wow...this poem is great! I love how you took the colors of the world and put them together into one poem. Your imagery is great (obviously because this ...

Hi there! Before I start the review, I would just like to say that this is a brilliant poem.*Presses the like button* You did a great job displaying your emotions ...

Hi there! Wow. That's really all I need to say, wow. This is great! I loved it so much I read through it about three or four times! It's written ...

Hi there! My comments are in red . I hope I don't sound harsh in my review! The warmth that you provide with just one hug, that is capable of ...

Hi there! My comments are in red : If I thought this would happen, I wouldn't have let you sit by me that day. If I thought this would happen, ...