Noelle

Hi there! My comments are in red below. You're always wearing a mask Afraid to show the world Who you really are Nice start. You never stop acting Never stop ...

Hi there! All right, my comments are below in bold . I'm walking through these empty halls filled with memories of you This sentence really sets the tone of the ...

Hi there! All right, my comments are in red below. A picture's worth a thousand words This is so true. is what they say, or so I've heard. But think ...

Hi there! All right, one nitpick: Soaked in bleach and drowning drowned in oil The rest of this is in past tense, make sure you're consistant with your tenses. One ...

Hi there! All right, my comments are in red below. W here to go The first word of the poem should be capilatized. what to do what to dream what ...

Hi there! All right, my comments are in red below. The Heart, beat, beat, beating I like the repitition! in our chests. Housing our lives; Nice line. Our heart really ...

Hi there! I could've sworn that I already reviewed this, but I guess not. I'll review it now then! My comments are in red below. I don't want a lover ...

Hi there! All right, my comments are in red below. My perennial silhouette blackens my dark cold heart, cools my icy flesh, steals all my warmth, my grace it takes, ...

Hi there! Yes the captain of this ship holds wears a wetsuit made from fear. I just wanted to start off this review by saying I really like this line! ...

Hi there! All right, my comments are in red below. Staring in the mirror disgust ed with what you see No perfect model just the normal you and me So, ...

Hi there! All right, my comments are in red below. The world is my playground For me to learn new things I totally agree with these first two lines. And ...

Hi there! All right, a poem written entirely as a metaphor, can't wait to read it! My comments are in red below. He is the lonely stranger that travels everywhere. ...

Hi there! Alright, my comments are in red below: I don’t cry over spilt spilled milk, It's supposed to be spilled milk, right? It’s just not my style, Because I ...

When the lights go out And I'm stranded alone I'll think of you to comfort my fear And drive away my anxiety. This poem starts out really sweet. I hope ...

Hi there! My comments are in red below. When she's just talking to me And it feels like she's SCREAMING IN MY EAR I get the fact that you want ...