Noelle

Hi there! Allright, I don't have much to say about this because I can tell that it came straight from your heart. Who am I to critique your feelings? Anyway, ...

I've always had the idea of writing something in the perspective of animals. You know, like what do they think, do they really act like us? Stuff like that. That's ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS! But I and Vikram and I had decided that no matter what, we wanted his autograph and we were determined to get it. Just a ...

Hi there! Rain: This has great imagery. I can definitely see the rain falling from the sky, pounding down on the flowers making them droop. Although, something about the word ...

Hi there! The first sentence is correct. You can't really tell 'you' something, can you? You need tp say yourself. I hate spelling/grammer checkers because they get it wrong half ...

I wrote this poem about Hurricane Irene that hit the east coast this past weekend. I'm not the best poet out there, so don't expect much out of this. Tear ...

Hi there! Just a couple of nitpicks: He did n 't see how a fragile, five-foot eight man with the most 'nerdy' lifestyle could even seem remotely intimidating, but he ...

Hi there! I've found it much easier for me to review poems if I simply quote them and write my comments in the quote. That being said, my comments are ...

Hi there! First I'd like to say that you did a good job pulling me in a keeping me reading. You did a great job keeping the story moving and ...

Hi there! This is reall good. I've read a lot or your lyrivs (probably four or five of them) and they never seem to disappoint. You really do a great ...

Hi there! I remember reading this a couple weeks ago (or maybe a couple days?) but I didn't comment on it, so here goes! My comments are in red below. ...

Hi there! I really like this poem. I don't know why, but I really like reading things about when blacks and whites weren't equal. Don't get me wrong, I'm not ...

Hi there! Wow, this sounds interesting. All right, my comments are in red below. one night your window was open so i sat on the window sill and watched you ...

Hi there! I really enjoyed reading this poem. It's short, but you did a good job using the right words and putting a lot of meaning into a small space. ...

Hi there! I really like your poem. It's short and sweet and to the point. Good job! You put some great emotion into this and really made it believable. Your ...