Noelle

Hi there! This is a really great poem, I love it! You put a lot of emotion into this and that really made it stand out. I like the way ...

Why weren't you paying attention?

Hi there! I really enjoyed reading this poem! When I first saw the title, I thought it was going to be another love poem, but it definitely wasn't, it was ...

Rated 12+ because of reference to someone cutting themselves. I leaned back against the wall, letting the blood flow from my arm to the floor, splattering as it hit the ...

Hi there! Wow...this is great! It's a really powerful piece and you kept me reading to the very end. Your character's are so real, the reader can definitely relate to ...

Hi there! Spaces command me into nothing is to be ashamed of as far as Everything’s solid? These four lines are confusing to me. Honestly, I'm not really sure what ...

Hi there! These are some really great lyrics! It's refreshing to read the lyrics people post here on YWS because they're real. The types of songs that are popular now ...

Hi there! This was a very intereseting story. It was written well and May was definitely a believable character. I didn't find any grammer or spelling errors so you're good ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS! This is really great! You definitely put a lot of imagery into this. I could see everything you were describing, good job! I like the ...

Hi there! (again) I really like the beginning of this, you've got a good thing going. I like the way you wrote it, it seems like a poem. Your rhyming ...

Hi there! This is a very interesting story. I think your use of bad language really gets the point across of how intense it is between your main character and ...

Hi there! Wake me up from this I can't sleep in empty bliss Laugh and cry through my emptiness Laugh manically at my own craziness So, I really like this ...

Hi there! So since this isn't finished, I'll just comment on your refrain because that's the part you wanted to know about. I think your refrain is great. It really ...

Hi there! I really enjoyed reading this poem. It has a great flow and there's no part where it falters from the flow. You put good emotion into this. I ...

Hi there! I took four years of French in high school and I feel really stupid for not nowing what the word bonheur means! Does it mean hapiness? I feel ...