Noelle

Hi there! I really don't have anything to say about this except that I love it! :) I totally agree with everything you said in this and you did a ...

I guess this is a lyric poem, I'm not really sure. Anyway, I wrote this about a year and a half ago and it's not a poem I would brag ...

Hi there! This is a good start. Your characters are great, two complete opposites. You did a great job describing both of them, telling us exactly what we needed to ...

Hi there! This is really good. I don't know if it's supposed to be like this, but I see this whole story as a metaphor. It seems that the girl ...

Hi there! This is a really good piece. You did a good job describing this, I could feel the pain of the main character. You also did a good job ...

Hi there! This started out a little slow, just a description of your character's thoughts, but then you got into some adventure and a tad bit of mystery. When you ...

Hi there! This is a great poem. I was reading through this and I was going to quote my favorite part, but I couldn't find one specific part to quote! ...

Hi there! Wow...this is great! I was reading through this, my eyes glued to the screen; I didn't want to stop reading! These are the kind of stories I like, ...

Hi there! My corrections/comments are in purple below: I stand bravely at the top if the hill, looking down, Pushing Then I push forward with the silver poles. Gaining speed ...

Hi there! The ending of this made me laugh. :) This is a good piece, it has a lot of good dialouge. You didn't use much description which means your ...

Hi there! This is a really good poem, I enjoyed reading it! I like the way you told us a story and you were still able to keep it poetic. ...

Hi there! You know, I always find that we write the best when we're on an emotional high (or low). That being said, this is a really good poem. Like ...

Hi there! This is a really good start. I know it's not finished so I'm going to try and keep my review free of the questions I have. So, you ...

Hi there! This is interesting. Is it supposed to be an article or just a description of Hell? I'm just curious. Anyway, you did a good job with this. There's ...

Hi there! This is a good story and quite a good read. I like how you put 'rasp, rasp' in there many times before switching your main character's thoughts. You ...