Noelle

Hi there! Welcome to the site! I really enjoyed reading this. I was reading through it and I just though, wow this sounds amazing. You did a good job describing ...

Hi there! I like this chapter because it gives me some more information about Oscar. Now I feel like I know so much about him and I can understand the ...

Please help me out with this chapter. I really don't like it. It seems like I used it as a filler and it's not really that exciting. Plus it's super ...

Hi there! This is a good story. I like how there's not much detail, so my imagination is running wild now. I also like how you described everything. You did ...

Hi there! This is a really good start. I'll tell you, I was drawn in from the very beginning, wanting to know what was going to happen next. You did ...

I write something everyday, but it's usually really bad. Sometimes I just jot down a short story that I've had in my head for a while.

Hi there! Aw, this is such a cute story! I've actually never tried writing a children's story, but I think it's a great idea. I love how you chose a ...

Hi everyone!!! I feel like this thread is for new members, but when I joined I only focused on the writing part of the site So, after skipping over this ...

“Cody, this is kind of freaky,” Leslie said, walking closer to him. Cody simply laughed. “You were the one who wanted to go in here in the first place. Where’s ...

This is basically just dialouge. I'm not really sure why I wrote this, but it's here! Review away. The sound of breaking glass stopped her. Turning around, she gasped in ...

Hi there! This is a really good start. I'm definitely intrigued by this and I want to know more. Just like HereBeMonsters (cool name!) said before me, there's no spelling ...

Hi there! Wow, this is just...I really don't know how to describe this. It's most definitely disturbing. You did a great job describing the main character's feelins. I could feel ...

Hi there! Welcome to the site! I'll start off by saying that this definitely pulled me into this stroy. You did a good job giving us enough details to keep ...

Hi there! I really like this. I was rapping it in my mind while I was reading it! :D It's pretty awesome how your words flow together. This has a ...

Hi there! I disagree with what everyone said before me (sorry all you who got here before me). Sure, the vocabulary is a little simple, but it doesn't need to ...