Noelle

Ever since I started college, I have had no free time to get on YWS. So I've decided to leave the site and totally turn my focus to getting my ...

Hi there! Wow...I absolutely love this! There's a nice bit of mystery here, making me wonder what exactly is going on. I like how the only thing we know is ...

Hi there! Alright, this chapter is a little disappointing after the mysterious prologue. Who knows, maybe you'll go back to that in the next chapter or something, but I was ...

Hi there! Sorry it took me a long time to respond to your request, but I've been pretty busy. Anyway, I'm here to review! First off I'd like to say ...

Hi there! Wow, this is a great story! I like your style. I think it's great that you kept the words and sentences simple; they really put a lot of ...

So, I know I haven't been on in while, but once Christmas break starts, I'll be on almost non-stop again. I had a thread in here before, but it wasn't ...

“So who’s ready to take a trip?” Peter asked once Bryn was out there with us. “To Neverland?!” Tilak exclaimed. Peter nodded. You would’ve thought that he told Tilak Christmas ...

After my brothers and I had eaten dinner, we read a story about Peter Pan like I promised. Tilak insisted on acting it out, so that's what my brothers did ...

I’m sure all of you have heard of those stories where children are left home alone and they have amazing adventures before their parents come home. Well, this is one ...

Hi there! Alright, it's been a while since I did this, so I'm going to try to get back into the swing of reviewing here. First off I want to ...

I really don't want to do this, but it's gotta happen. :( I'm going to be off of the site until basketball season in over. We just had our first ...

1. My laptop (I would die without this thing) 2. Radio/CD Player 3. My Bed 4. School Textbooks (I try to stay away from these unless I absolutely need them, ...

Noeolle Gah, so close! :)

Hi there! I totally agree with emmylou. I believe that his poem could've used more background information. I'm not really sure what's going on, why this person is being killed, ...

Hi there! This is a really good poem. Sure, it may not be serious like the other poems I've read, but it's still a good one. You did a good ...