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NocturnalSupremacy92

  • Other Poetry Re: The Forest's Storyteller

    "I'm uncertain why certain stanzas here appear in quotation marks. If the reason for this is in relation to the title "The Forest's Storyteller" and these stanzas are injections from ...

    Jan 27, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: The Forest's Storyteller

    A dank wooded forest, With a dead-limbed tree’s silhouette Setting the evening. Three sheep that stray from their shepherd Into daunting black woods, Encounter a residence of gloom and terror. ...

    Jan 25, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: I Can See You; I Can Feel You

    Part of me wants to love you, Part of me says don’t. I can see you. I can feel you. But are you really here? Am I just another reckless ...

    Jan 25, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: Do not Enter

    I think it's an overkill -_- just my opinion though...

    Jan 25, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: Goodbye forever

    This seemed more like something I'd put in a story as a character's lines than a pome. I would try a couple metaphors to make the reader think. Overall, I ...

    Jan 25, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: Nightmare In Shining Armour

    I tried to get all the misspelled words out of the piece and title, thanks you guys for pointing them out!!!

    Jan 25, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: Nightmare In Shining Armour

    I can be your nightmare In shining amour. The only reason I live is so that one day, I can die for you. What else is there? There’s no point ...

    Jan 22, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Kiss Me Once; Hurt Me Twice

    Kiss me once; hurt me twice. Just one time And I’ll be okay. One kiss and it’ll be over At least, for you. End my wanting. End my hopes. End ...

    Jan 22, 2008


You, who have all the passion for life that I have not? You, who can love and hate with a violence impossible to me? Why you are as elemental as fire and wind and wild things...
— Gone With the Wind