NoSleepNoDreams

Hey! Okay, pretty much love this. Firstly, It contains relation to harry potter and ties in a cookie. How much better can it get? Maybe if it had unicorns...just throwing ...

Hey! Okay, so this story seems good. Just a few things. First, to scrutinize. Her dark , brown hair comma after dark The girl seemed innocent and absolutly normal. One ...

hoping for at least five

Okay, so this is just a story I wrote. I'm unsure if I want to continue it, I feel like it could make a good story, but I'm not sure ...

Mkay, well, I also reviewed the first part of this story, and I kinda wanted to review this to. :) Now, I was curios and also read, Gillia's God 3. ...

Hey, RoseGryffindor! Okay, so i'd like to say that this was pretty good. However, I felt everything happened way to fast. Of course, I understand that this is a short ...

Mkay, so first chapter of a story i'm writing. The romance will come in most likely during the second or third chapter so keep on reading. The fist chapter is ...

Hello! Okay, so firstly, loved it. :) You used great detail and me want to keep reading. There were however a few things i noticed. framed by your long , ...

Hey! Okay, so classic song about someone special. From what I can tell, it's pretty good. But, there are just a few things i noticed. my head is fill will ...

Okay, I have to say i really liked this. I wouldn't know what people who feel like this go through, but honestly, from what I can tell, you capture it ...

Hey. Okay, I love this poem. Mainly, because i think almost everyone in the world has a friend like this. Just noticed a few things. I think i'll be jumping ...

Okay, well, I read through it, and it seems interesting. I do agree with Nightshade, about how you stated a lot of facts in the second paragraph. Don't be afraid ...

Hello there :) I'd like to say that i think the idea of the poem is great, but I spotted a few things that you could might want to change. ...

First post :) Not really a poem person writing stories are more my type, but i wrote this memory poem and figured i post it. --------------- Soon after familiar tires ...

Not a lot to read, but the idea of what your trying to say is good. Even if it was just a random comment you probably should have tried to ...