Niraco

Bad idea saying that to a teacher xD

I was going to put the word 'fuck' in it and when I posted it I kept it in. I edited it due to my friend suggesting 'fork' which would ...

Thank you.

I wasn't too sure if I should have added a comma so thank you for pointing that out :D

The formatting is wrong? Could you explain please, thanks? :)

Thank you :D

You're the first Scot I've really met too xD It's cool I actually agree with you in a lot of ways.

I'll change the 'but' to an 'and'. I actually went back and forth as to if I should put slang terms in it. I was kinda worried that no one ...

Hamilton is close enough. I was a little worried that no one would understand where I'm really coming from but I'm really glad a fellow Scot did read this. I'm ...

Thank you for that nice review. I'm going to change some of the punctuation right now.

Thank you for the review, I'll go back and make the changes due to your suggestions. One thing is that this was put into stanzas but YWS just hates me.

You're welcome :D Glad I was able to help.

You seem to mean well which is good :D

Without harsh reviews how would writers grow?

I get what you mean. I like to think that here almost everyone takes reviews rather well.