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She stands here and waits on the sidewalk of Forth, Wanting so badly her home and its warmth. He's coming, he's coming, she thinks to herself, And yet she is ...

Wow. That was amazing. It had a very good feel to it, I couldn't see any mistakes really, but I'm not the best at spotting them. Keep up the good ...

Hey, welcome! Yay, someone else from south africa! hehe Anyways, don't worry about being a newbie, it passes. I'd love to read your poems sometime, post them soon. Oh, btw, ...

This is quite a good poem. Very different writing stile to me so I don’t know if this crit is alright. The Bad Things The Bad Things come at night, ...

There was talk of connection, There were bowed heads and sighs. There was talk of deception, Yet I could see through the lies. There was talk of abduction, There were ...

Your you. I’m me. Too very different people It’s hard to believe... But we are in love. No one understands. But one day I know... He'll take my hand. We ...

I recognize your name and avatar. Are you on YWO? Anyway, welcome ^^ yeah, I am. What's your name on there? I'm Majyk. I think I critiqued a poem of ...

OK, I decided to post a poem here :oops: . One of my first ones so yeah... hope that you like it. Slamming Doors and broken hearts Slamming Doors and ...

I recognize your name and avatar. Are you on YWO? Anyway, welcome ^^ yeah, I am. What's your name on there?

I think that this is a wonderfull poem. There arn't many mistakes but I'll point out the ones that I see. Sleep Comes when I shut my eyes ( Mabey ...

I really liked this poem, it had a good flow and rhythm to it. I'm going to review each verse seperately... I don't know if I told this tale, Another ...

Amazing, that was a really brilliant piece of work. just a suggestion, but maybe you should put in some question marks in the appropriate places and caps. Other than that, ...

Amazing, that was a really brilliant piece of work. just a suggestion, but maybe you should put in some question marks in the appropriate places and caps. Other than that, ...

Hi everyone I'm new. I love writing and reading and i also enjoy poetry. (state the obvious, lol). My name is Simone... To be honest, I don't know what else ...