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Hey Dante! I'm Hannah, Hannahsaur, Ninja, NCM, or (as the dear Nova has named me) the Stealthy Biscuit. If you have any questions, ask me! I can't help much with ...

Well, I'm no poet, but this was promising. You could touch it up a bit, maybe refine it. Some ending words seemed out of place, but I could be wrong; ...

Hi Sunny! Ok, so this was good! A very good base for a story- maybe as a prologue or something? But anyway. I think that it would make a bit ...

Okay. Clarification. The story takes place in a theater. It is not a play. They are just sitting on the stage. She does not shift to a bed. She falls ...

May I has a review on the following? In order, that would be: Gabriel (an excerpt) and the Rain, Summer, and Ice Cream series thus far. Sorry for the long ...

Hey! I'm Ninja (or NCM, whichever), and I'll review this chapter for you. First of all, this sounds promising, keep it up. But there were a few mistakes-accidents, I'm sure- ...

So, this is another sneak peek. This time, I'm using more magical elements. Set in the sixth book. Griffin, Ella, and the crew are trying to get a very special ...

I climbed over the tightly packed rows of chairs to fall into the seat next to Seth. Simply because it happened so frequently, he plugged the earbud that wasn't in ...

Update soon, 'kay? I like this novel!

This is sort of a big jump from chapter two. Did I miss something?

I really like it! It's really good, I didn't even notice the grammatical mistakes. It's really intriguing and interesting, like at the beginning of a movie right before they show ...

To Crescent: just look in the possibly related thingy. I know there's no real conflict, but that's sort of the point. I really wanted to make a novel where it's ...

"Darren, status report." I said, turning my head sideways. "Almost there.... and... done. Playing Student's Choice playlist now." I smiled. Darren had figured out a way to hook up the ...

Don't worry, they will!

Is cool, is cool. I liked this, but I really don't think it tied up the gajillion loose ends that book had. But then again, maybe it wasn't supposed to. ...