NinjaCookieMonster

I thought I would bash you because I love The Only Exception, but it being Harry Potter.. well, you're safe from the wrath of Hannahsaur. Sometimes the rhythm was off ...

... Well. I think that if you spruced it up a little, it could be... better. However, I do think you should think about what you're putting into this site, ...

Aw, cute. I like his expression, like he's confused or something. I'm pretty sure that's me in tiny dinosaur form. I think its name shall be... Plupolafugus. Yuuuup. As cute ...

Kay-kay! I'm Ninja, I'll be your reviewer for today. What I would change it to This had to be a dream . I turned around . T he kitchen had ...

Cool! Some are kind of twisted, but it just makes me appreciate them that much more because it means you put that much more effort into it. I especially like ...

Aw, this is cute! 'Fraid I can't give a full a on review 'cause I honestly don't know how to, but I'll try. I liked the definitions, they were sweet ...

Please review this. It's only on thing, but it would be great if you reviewed my other stuff. I will loff you forever and ever if you do! And even ...

I looked to Axela to Nadia and back again. Nadia looked back at me with her honey brown and emerald eyes pleading and held out a plastic wrapped brownie. She ...

Mmkay! You asked, and shall receive! What I would change it to The streets were brightly lit, something that hardly made an impression on me anymore. I sat in the ...

Cool poem. What was the assignment? Nitpick time! Capitalization, first of all, was nonexistent. In line 6, did you mean 'pursuing'? 'Twas a bit short; a continuation would have been ...

Good piece, but I have to nitpick you on block paragraph. I agree totally, even though I have no younger siblings, let alone a younger brother. I went through the ...

O.O *clears throat* Right. Um, one thing I noticed is that you are quite fond of cussing. It fit the piece, but I would make sure that you don't go ...

So! I decided that I want to review more things to balance out my other posts. I can review anything, basically, except for maybe art and photography, and maybe poetry. ...

HOLY COW. If you don't continue this, I will hunt you down. I am so intrigued it's not even funny. Seriously. Do not discontinue this. I will not be pleased. ...

Hey! Basically anything on my profile can be reviewed. So... go to there! I don't feel like posting links. If you do review my various fictions, I shall love you ...