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Naw, it's not too morbid. A touch so, but not entirely. Nitpick: "Once upon a Time" "Time" doesn't have to be capitalized. Actually, it really shouldn't be. Your teacher was ...

Okay, so I really liked this piece, and I have but one nitpick. (inner author: Haha, seriously, one? No one's that good. Me: Yes, seriously. And she was that good. ...

The third one was my favorite. The angle was what did it for me, and the color palette. The second might be a runner up, maybe not. The first was ...

Glad! Anyhoo, I thought these were all very well done. I liked numbers 1, 4, 6, 8. First: coloring, lighting, all visually pleasing. Fourth: I liked how... um... it was ...

Oh, amazing! The second one is by far my favorite. The colors in all of them were so vivid and striking, it was like hi-def. The third one might be ...

I really liked the last one. It was just... just... so ADORABLE! The first one's pretty, but I shall be forever partial to the second one. The lighting just on ...

I think the last two are my favorites. The first of the last because of the way the light looks on the water and how the edges of the sun ...

Oh, woooooow. These are all stunning. I especially have a soft spot for the first one; it's all very... mysterious, almost. Also, I think that book was Alice in Wonderland, ...

I marched firmly over to Jake, in all his six foot one, hundred fifty pound glory and yanked on his upper arm. I'm proud to say that I managed to ...

I decided the second Jocelyn approached me with a mascara wand and a tube of lip gloss that a trip to the library would, in fact, be better. Jocelyn had ...

OK, I actually thought the the rhythm was alright. However, maybe you should have started a new paragraph with "But the Bible also helps me keep these thoughts subdued", because ...

My favorites: #5, #6, #8 #5: I liked how the plant was a little blurred. On the others, it didn't look right, but on this, it worked. #6: The lighting ...

I liked this. I always find I like the pieces where it's black and white and then there's one pop of color. But I agree with Yuri, I think a ...

Well, this was good. Nitpick: "The next time I was in a bright room, that smelled sharply of alcohol." Wording: Goood. Comma: BAAAAD. Kill it! Complaint: My only one is ...

Well, this is a first. I have no nitpicks, no complaints, no grammatical errors, nothing. WOW. Consider yourself successful. You have rendered me without critique. I actually really like the ...