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Re: At A Lake
Oh. Em. Gee. About the second and third of course. I just looooved them, wouldn't mind having them as a wallpaper. They looked so freaking serene and the water was ...
Jun 11, 2010 -
Re: The Dreamkeepers: Chapter 3
I belched yet again, crumpled up the empty Monster can in my hand, and tossed it over the kitchen's island, landing it perfectly into the heap of food remains that ...
Jun 11, 2010 -
Re: My Saskatchewan Beach
Okay! Time to rid you of that awful feeling when your work has no comments! #1: Hm. I think it could be a great shot, but typically the best photos ...
Jun 10, 2010 -
Re: The Dreamkeepers: Chapter 2
The Haven isn't like other buildings. In fact, it doesn't look like a building at all. That's mainly due to one fact: the only part of it above ground is ...
Jun 8, 2010 -
Re: The Dreamkeepers: Chapter 1
One, two, three. I counted the number of times my feet bounced off the side of the Empire State Building. I leaned my head back against my little hiding spot ...
Jun 8, 2010 -
Re: 4 pictures
Well, first and last are definitely my favorites. The first is so calm, it's almost strange that it's of something so wild. And I just like good pictures of fire, ...
Jun 4, 2010 -
Re: An Elephant
Aw, cool! For some reason I'm not digging the one on the right, though; something about it seems... off. I don't know, it just does. The one on the left, ...
Jun 4, 2010 -
Re: Colours (for contest).
Meh, first one I don't love. But the second and third are awesome! I like how the second has a sense of simplicity, like... summertime. I don't know, my mind ...
Jun 4, 2010 -
Re: After the Rain
Well, these are really pretty. I liked color and the drops. It looks like it's in hi def or something. It looked almost sad because of the lighting; I though ...
Jun 4, 2010 -
Re: Rain, Summer, and Ice Cream: Chapter Nine
My legs took action before I could think, springing into a sprint down the hall. I had to go blank, had to stop thinking, before I could even hope to ...
Jun 4, 2010 -
Re: Rain, Summer, and Ice Cream: Chapter Eight
The silence after the final bell was almost eerie. Our school is never silent- ever -and it was like someone had hit a giant mute button. It was unreal. No ...
Jun 3, 2010 -
Re: With Arms Around the Engine (My Biggest Project So Far)
Holy chips and queso. This is so.... intricate. Like, I can see little inclines and declines in the surfaces, and the patterns on even the tiniest parts. It's so incredibly ...
May 31, 2010 -
Re: Upon Waking (1)
*shudder* CREEEEEPYYY. Anyhoo. Few nitpicks: “Th-there is n-no way your human,” Correction: "you're". "I just have to get around the creature!" Did you mean to put this in italics? Since ...
May 27, 2010 -
Re: Diary of a Broken Girl [Chapter Five]
Herro! I am the Stealthy Nom Nom (I am forever in debt to Nova for that name), and I shall comment/review. I liked the emotions portrayed in this, and all ...
May 27, 2010 -
Re: Vampyre
... Well, this was mildly to moderately to severely awesome. I actually have no nitpicks. Shocker, ain't it? Inner Author: Pft. No one can go without any nitpicks. Me: Wanna ...
May 27, 2010
