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Re: White Ravens
WOW...this has to be one of the best poems i have read so far, yes it is long but as you read more and more it just keeps pulling into ...
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: The tree Ballet
Hi there thank you so much for your review on my poem:) just wanted to thank you for the corrections i have adjusted them:) and i apretiate it and also ...
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Re: I'm So Full Of It
I love this, it totally brings out another side of poetry which reminds us that there are so many different styles and that each person has there very own style. ...
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: The unstoppable force
It’s over now It’s done, it’s gone We started as the unstoppable force But now our story can’t go on We tumbled, we turned We broke, we burned We pulled ...
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: New member
HI Rin and Yuri:) thank you guys so much for the welcome and RIn thank you for the review on my poem i really did use the advice thank you ...
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: Breaking Me
This is really good:) very emotional and i love the use emotive words it just adds to the feeling of the poem and brings the reader into the poem and ...
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: Earthquake
A little short but a good poem, i likt that you took something like homework which normally would be boring for people and turned it into a fun poem, that ...
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: Something in my closet
WOW absolutly amazing...cant believe i am actually having trouble to find words for this poem all i can say brilliant:)
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: I picked up the cam when I was bored late in the night
wow these pics are amazing! im no photographer so sadly i cannot give you any prefessional tips so all i can do is *hi -5 and say awesome pics!
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: Your Dream
short sweet and to the point, very powerful and great use of imagery that not only lets readers see the setting but also lets us feel the emotions involved in ...
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: Just Leave.
Hi there my friend:) a poem for all the annoying teachers out there haha, i like it though it is a little short..but is there a reason why it is ...
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: Sick Day
First thing i thought when i read this is FUN haha, i like this poem because it seems like you were having some fun with it and i think its ...
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: The tree Ballet
I saw a tree move It glides back and forth Vertically expressing its horizontal desire; it started to dance The wind making its movements legal Its slender arms though tough ...
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: New member
Hi moonlight an Lava thank you so much for the reply :) i just know that I will enjoy this site, I have been going through some works now and ...
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: Silly Me
[quote][/quote]Silly me, I'm back here, again Holding on to something that I want far away And here I am, trying to walk away Mending my own thoughts and lying to ...
Jan 23, 2011
