NikkiLow

I'd appreciate it if you read and reviewed this. :3 Thanks a ton. The café was filled to the brim with busy, bustling bees. The voices in the room were ...

I have to hand it to you, I liked it. I wasn't quite sure what all was going on, but it kept me interested whilst I was reading. I found ...

I must admit, as I'm writing this, I have to say I haven't read your story yet. I'll comment on it altogther after I'm done. :) ------------------------------------------------------------------------

Awuh, she's just mean. She didn't even read the whole thimg, so she can't properly criticize you. While I did like it, the characters got a bit confusing and mixed ...

I wrote this last year, hah, guess I should mention.. I wrote this for nanowrimo in school. Everything is thick and uneeded because I was trying to bump up the ...

First draft. Please read and comment, thanks. The café was filled to the brim with busy, bustling bees. The voices in the room were loud, obnoxious. Many of the people ...

Wow, I must say, that was very impressive. Makes most of what I read seem like children's work. Though I normally wouldn't read this sort of thing, I was too ...

This is my first draft- I'm not editing it, just adding to and hoping it doesn't suck. I'm not trying to make any catching, subtle endings, just ending it as ...