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The rest of my existence is doomed to be spent in a small, dark, crowded place. I've grown old and ugly, useless. I am surpassed by those younger and sweet ...

Gotta say Gryphon, I'm a bit confused. I didn't describe any of the qualities in the 'other' girl- I merely made it so that it was obvious the boy was ...

Been in the mood the mood to write lately, so this is something really short I decided to write. ^_^ Hope it's decent!! Walking down the street is hard. You ...

It's almost kind of funny, The way you say my name. You say it loud and proud, As if I'm something you can tame. You like the way I purr, ...

I didn't mean for the poem to be insinuating anything. It was something I wrote as it came. I don't know where the idea came from, and I'm sorry you ...

**** I realized that the last stanza of my poem was really.. not flowy.. so I decided to change it and hopefully make some corrections overall. Thanks for all the ...

This is a very short introduction I am working on, and hoping to expand on. It's been a while since I've written anything, and I'd like to know what you ...

Good story. :) I have to say though, it got a bit confusing. All the he, it, The Hero, Blue Jay, partner, etc. I couldn't tell who was who, what ...

Piper’s eyes rolled up into the back of her head as her head bounced off the pavement with a sickening crack. The man, young, fresh, and covered in blood, was ...

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Hm.. I have to say, I've read a lot of things like this. Personally, this isn't something I'd read- I'm into reading from authors like J.R. Ward, and so to ...

Hmm. I think you wrote this very well. There were a couple words that weren't needed, and kind of disrupted the flow, but I think the end result is good. ...

Second attempt at posting- review? :D Black, elegant curls bounced on Karen’s shoulders as she walked away from the woman kneeling on the cold tile floor with her head in ...

Second attempt. =p I laughed, fingering the beautiful array of gems in the palms of my hands, rubbing my forefingers over their smooth surfaces. I looked back at the jewelry ...

Hehe, thanks for the review Speele. I know that people must be wondering why the hell Shanna doesn't talk, it's because she's mute. I'm still trying to figure out the ...