Nikki17

It is brief, unedited and not nearly done. It's something I was scribbling down while teacher was going on about the area of a triangle. Who in my grade doesn't ...

ok, thanks! I'm really not very good at this and just learning so I don't really have much idea of what's going on. I'll write a new version in a ...

Wow Ayra. Honestly, I think you are the best Writer I have ever seen who's even under 18. You are outstanding! I have sloppy, short, un-detailed (I know it's not ...

oh..I apoligize for the title being the unproper f princess. I had changed it from fairy princess to princess rather quickly. Yes I know there are many typos and spelling ...

the pink with the lace? Or the baby blue with the frills?" "oh, well..the pink goes with my skin tone..." "ugh!" I cried gazing at my older sister,Grace in disgust. ...

reading it over...maybe actually too mcuh detail. It focuses the reader's detail on the descriptions and confuses them.. so they don't exactly know what is going on for parts.

very descriptive. Awesome detail! :D

I'm a princess, I guess. I live in a big old castle and have a king and queen for a father and mother and all that...but I don't exactly put ...