Nikki17

thanks koko. I ahve some more work if you'd like to read it called 15 money making ideas and in non-fic. I only have "1 money making idea" so far ...

many many errors. Where do I start? You said: Are story starts with the Crinoline family. Are? I think you meant our. ( This is a very basic opening. You ...

( Whoops, sorry for the chat speak. I believe I wrote "lol" a couple of times and I can see how annoying that would be. Sorry!) Nikki

This is kind of strange. I can't think of much to add. The critique before me was amazing and picked out everything (that I can see, at least) and I ...

a few minor changes have been made. I am asuming this will take a few re-writes before it gets to a point where I'm satisfied. (Yes, I KNOW I have ...

thx beaverpop but I really don't need all the praise. YWS is for critiques. It makes me happy that you like it but try to focus more on the mistakes. ...

I must be completely honest with u I'm not completely in love with this poem. It's kind of interesting but difficult to follow and hard to understand. Some grammar problems ...

(Hoping this is eat and not beat lol) Joe once smelled sushi coming from the toilet. Ann didn't give a potato to Joe because he was imaging pranks involving birds ...

The main Novel I am writing is called 15 money making ideas and is for kids ages 8-18. It has a number of great ideas all year round. I might ...

thank you! Nikki

For people reading this and thinking "Why on earth are there so many errors?" I didn't realy understand how to edit and spellcheck my own work so I ended up ...

thank you! I'm really new to this and have very bad typing skills. So any help is appreciated. P.S. I wrote something in non-fic called A guide to snow shoveling ...

whoops! Sorry about the double post! I submitted it but then went back to preview it a second later..I think I might ahve submitted it again. Sorry! AT least now ...

Thank you very much! I know my writing really sloppy but I wrote something a little better in non-fic called a guide to snowshoveling. Wanna help me edit and improve ...

But you're really good! Wanna read my short...thing?( I wouldn't exactly call it a story, mroe like a guide) It's a few paragraphs long and in non-fic called A guide ...