Nikiller

This is the first poem i've written in a while, as I mainly prefer to write stories, but anyway, read, enjoy and all constructive criticism would be much appreciated. Thank ...

Hi there, i am a new member and i have been dying to upload this extract from a story i am currently working on entitled 'A Lifetime of Regret'. Please ...

i enjoyed it and i feel that you used the first person well to tell the story.

the plot is developing nicely, however there is not much reference to the setting. i feel that developing these two together will solidify the story. also describe characters more instead ...