Nike

thanks guys! i thought that i should take my life experiences onto paper, so here they are. my last posts weren't as good as this one. :D

i dont understand what is happeneing here. did the girl get kidnpped? and the lack of description is bad. add more description plz! and explain wat is happening here.

you should add more detail in the book. When she walks aroud or eats, tell us deeper thoughts. Add more detail then it will be fmore intersting but i like ...