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Everyday I’ve been doing the same thing. 1.) Wake up, brush teeth, dress-up, eat breakfast, catch the bus to school 2.) Go to school, live through the day 3.) Come ...

Jabberhut pretty muc explained everything and the others and i agree with them. You ned more description and more info on the characters. I dont know how she got o ...

i dont understand what is happeneing here. did the girl get kidnpped? and the lack of description is bad. add more description plz! and explain wat is happening here.

you should add more detail in the book. When she walks aroud or eats, tell us deeper thoughts. Add more detail then it will be fmore intersting but i like ...

Wow! I like this book so is a bit confusing when Emma opened The Golden Book and read what she has already done. I thought you typed it all over ...

Everyday I’ve been doing the same thing. 1.) Wake up, brush teeth, dress-up, eat breakfast, catch the bus to school 2.) Go to school, live through the day 3.) Come ...

I’m walking down the sidewalk with warm tears running down my cheeks. I feel so cold on this winter day. The snow is falling and the scent of cold snow ...