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Re: Remember Me (1) Fourteen (Please read and comment!)
Hi, pshhxhoney! I loved this! There are some editing to be made. You should take the story down a bit slower, it's just so fast (I had the same deal ...
Mar 15, 2010 -
Re: Annoying?
"ed" is American (im American so u can always ask me!) and "t" is British. i never write "t" only "ed".
Mar 15, 2010 -
Re: The Other Side Chapter 1 part 2
Chapter 1 part 1 is in the (New Book) The Other Side book! I get into my room locking my door. Complete madness fills me as I sit on my ...
Mar 15, 2010 -
Re: Stay With Me
I love this story! It never happens, but i hope it does! It brought me the feeling i love. But here are some things that should be edited. Remember to ...
Mar 13, 2010 -
Re: Of Loss and Love (chp.2) [newly edited]
this is a great story, i'm not a huge fan of the royal life, so it surprises me that i enjoyed this. You are great at this. Th edits should ...
Mar 13, 2010 -
Re: Love in the rain
it was interesting but too short to review! you should type more 'cause you're good. just some grammer and spelling, what the writer's above me said. Watch what you are ...
Mar 13, 2010 -
Re: Give Me Your Hands Part 1
i like this! it's very interesting! just split it into parts it'll be better, k?
Mar 12, 2010 -
Re: Remember Me- Prologue (Edited)
this was nice, really nice. but it sounds really sad too. I agree with the writer above me (sorry i forgit your name!) you should edit what the writer told ...
Mar 12, 2010 -
Re: Umm.. Hello :')
welcome to YWS! i've actually just joined a while ago too. But you will do great here! Good luck! :)
Mar 12, 2010 -
Re: (New Book) The Other Side
I'm in my room doing my homework as the music from my iPod Soother fills my room; I can see the blue light from the Soother fill the room. I'm ...
Mar 12, 2010 -
Re: Happiness
People are HUGE fans of happiness. Like right now I'm watching a hilarious movie as I'm typing this, the movie makes me happy 'cause it makes me laugh. Some people ...
Mar 12, 2010 -
Re: Is Losing Okay?
wow. i love this post! i always thought winning isn't really as important as doing your best! but when you win, you can see your best is really good. im ...
Mar 10, 2010 -
Re: The Unknown
thanks guys! i thought that i should take my life experiences onto paper, so here they are. my last posts weren't as good as this one. :D
Mar 10, 2010 -
Re: The Unknown
Sometimes I really have no clue of what’s going on in my life. The whole world moves along without me and I stay seated on my bed thinking and wondering ...
Mar 8, 2010 -
Re: Nemesis Chapter 2 (edited)
Chapter 2 Tom picked me up to the party and we landed at Ryan’s house. It looks different from when I last was here. The people, the party feeling, the ...
Feb 12, 2010
