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nice, i like it! its very interesting. But be more descriptive'cause i have no idea what the place looks like or how the people even look like! But all in ...

I agree with The New Hero. You should do what he says. I love this, really i want more! Nike :) keep typing!

I love this! I can't beleive you write so fast and so amazingly! Continue, please! Nike :)

My pick is "Ghost Writer," I love the book! But the movie misses alot! That book is so amazing. I love Harry Potter too but I didn't read the books ...

nice. I loved it! just slow down a bit, the pace is so fast . and show some more emotion in your characters. sometimes I couldn't tell who's saying so ...

Walking home takes forever. At least it's almost summer. The winter weather still wants to rest here and the spring just lets it. The cold wind blows my hair as ...

One Day Verse 1: Here I am. Traveling. Everywhere. My life is not the same. Sometimes I wish, I wish that I could go back to my past. Oh, I ...

Nice. Really nice. But I have to be a bit picky here. Remember to re-read you r piece BEFORE submitting it! You had many errors as in the past tense-present ...

I decided "If I read the 1st chapter, why don't I go on to the next?!" And this is a good peice. But I ,again, agree with Tanya. MC: What ...

this is a nice piece. I am not gonna say that you should change the whole idea. I agree with the corections Tanya told you to do. But all in ...

Hi I'm Nike! I'm here to review your story today! Okay, I like it alot, but you have made some spelling and grammer errors. What didn't atract to me was ...

It's nice. Just I have a few pointers. 1.) Describe the area the story takes place. 2.) We don't know the MC age at all, or even what year/centiery this ...

My topic has really made me think twice. When I watch Ghost Whisperer I am amazed of seeing ghosts, it would be cool but then again, it would be creepy ...

I hope you make a continuation! I loved this sooo much! But I thought that you were going a bit fast at some parts like "She gave up after the ...

I loved this, keep on writing more!!!!! i can'r wait to read more of this!