Nike

Nice! I agree with Embee 100%. You do have mny errors but your story is chatchy! I loved it! I think this story has good potential keep on writing. Nike ...

I like it alot. But I do agree with the reviewers above me. I'll actually read the book because of your drawing! Keep on drawing! Nike :)

It's sooo cute! I love the picture; the sunlight works with the horse. Amazing! :D

I liked this alot. The emotion was great. I was just blanked because you didn't describe the surroundings that well. All I knew is that there were some reporters and ...

thanks, I'll watch out for those commas! I got the avatar after playing a game on Disney Channel from the Phineas and Ferb games.

Sooo-I decided to type a new book (but don't worry, I'm stll typing Unknown Incidence) check it out and tell me what you think! 8) Sitting here has been killing ...

All I need is a freak that I thought was my best friend to say that he loves me. It’s not right-we did date earlier but that doesn’t mean we ...

This is very nice. It shocked me when the MC (Charlie) ad sex with her friends cousin, this made me more interested (which is very good!!!) no problems. Just keep ...

Chapter 9 All the darkness around us lets us hide from the whole crowd of people that want our pictures. “Z-ack,” I whisper, shivering at the thought of pictures. “It ...

This is a very nice piece. the description is good. but you might wanna talk more and SLOW DOWN! your story is just sooooo fast. when you type: i feel ...

LOL! hilarious-but you do need to edit follow the wirters above me! Amazing work! :D Nike :)

one word: AMAZING! but I highly agree with Lava. You gotta edit some things-but overall this is amazing, I love the story about the frindship and the romantic side too. ...

Chapter 8 I sit up on my bed yawning. It looks like its 6am outside. My bed covers have fallen on the ground showing their guitar shaped figures to the ...

this piece is nicely written. But you did have many mistakes so i think you should do what shubhiloves2write wrote. I'll loved this piece because it was well written and ...

Wow, just wow. This took my breath away-the love between them was so deep. You do need editing in this piece just re read it in grammer and in spelling. ...